Wednesday, November 4, 2009

notas para escribimos.

car ride home- best or better friend a stoner. smoking a joint talking about the universe destroying and re inventing itself. kid is silent. comic relief.


mom- blows her head off in a struggle between the father in candle light, candles melted down to wicks.
-dad actually pulls the trigger even though he's trying to stop her
-introduce police detective.
kid- upon discovering suicide he's cold, cool about what happened. packs his stuff leaves
-smokes cigarette on the way over to bus stop and doesn't even realize it as it burns to down to the filter- burns his hand.

bus ride- goes to the back, passes out.

weather- rain stops by the time he gets to the bus

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